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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdTAB6l1mXS
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDFQjWHhkkL
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwfzrdgWPTU
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAcXQNVTED8
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmpX9BoztP5
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!690Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtWnrnykqap
Well done, Zak!
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