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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16839Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3CR7e3VaME
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 839Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLhJDAbfkb2
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.839Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi8jqZCB0z0
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.839Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGkBzpRCtKV
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!839Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnKCEhpJk72
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!839Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCjUpIes8w6
Well done, Zak!
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