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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16642Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4qK6wtPEgJ
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 642Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9gygXt3UD2
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.642Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8aSTiHYlUf
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.642Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3VPRRgHLBf
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!642Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcd8MVHClGa
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!642Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT1A8GInVJ5
Well done, Zak!
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