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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16659Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡheVgpevNBG
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 659Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUdwjCIcafy
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.659Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsTINBOkZvg
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.659Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ02NMvfDWQG
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!659Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq7WggrUnsy
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!659Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN48WmJywQd
Well done, Zak!
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