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M. Williams
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I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 610Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJhxo6fB6jO
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.610Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7VppvNBonZ
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.610Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDuvNfI0Vbk
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!610Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSCqCZZ7rSF
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!610Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE1zc8uQilv
Well done, Zak!
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