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縱看是李清照<<如夢令.昨夜雨疏風驟>>的四句主句:昨夜雨疏風驟,濃睡不消殘酒,卻道海棠依舊,應是綠肥紅瘦。634Please respect copyright.PENANAQ7lgRPwgu2
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感覺這次寫得不太好...還請見諒及多多指點XD634Please respect copyright.PENANAqPp80nh1T7