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雖然題目是寫詩,但還是按平仄寫了首<<如夢令>>,也可當作是首新詩吧XD420Please respect copyright.PENANAF5c4ZBxctX
縱看是李清照<<如夢令.昨夜雨疏風驟>>的四句主句:昨夜雨疏風驟,濃睡不消殘酒,卻道海棠依舊,應是綠肥紅瘦。420Please respect copyright.PENANACr10Qk4V88
四首分別由夜、早、午、昏看花間園林境況420Please respect copyright.PENANAOqRa1zf5qN
*第二句:夜練銀河天淡:用典范仲淹<<御街行>>的:天淡銀河垂地420Please respect copyright.PENANAQ5fdhWaREU
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感覺這次寫得不太好...還請見諒及多多指點XD420Please respect copyright.PENANAfr2PvWszYY