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雖然題目是寫詩,但還是按平仄寫了首<<如夢令>>,也可當作是首新詩吧XD598Please respect copyright.PENANAjgNEK3XBZT
縱看是李清照<<如夢令.昨夜雨疏風驟>>的四句主句:昨夜雨疏風驟,濃睡不消殘酒,卻道海棠依舊,應是綠肥紅瘦。598Please respect copyright.PENANA167wEs2LHd
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感覺這次寫得不太好...還請見諒及多多指點XD598Please respect copyright.PENANApMWqbvIdY0