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未完成的腦洞
ENTRY #12
Author: 朱諾(Juno)
Published:
Jan 13, 2019
未完成的腦洞
Published:
Jan 13, 2019
ENTRY #12
結語
Author: 朱諾(Juno)
Published:
Jan 13, 2019
1 Min Read
252 Words
No Plagiarism!60bTvpZv4klrUDkes83Iposted on PＥNAＮＡ

這次的名次是根據文筆、題材、人物塑造&世界觀來選擇，當然，作者的喜好也在裡頭。沒得名可能只是因為不合我的胃口，希望我的意見能提供大家幫助。

會選A桑這篇主要是因為人物塑造討喜&文筆流暢，雖然有小部分邏輯矛盾，但影響不大。整體來說是非常有趣的作品。

其實Stay with you跟Wendy的《古丁雷茲偵探集》相比，後者的發揮更穩定。前者在我看來雖然設定上有些問題沒有考慮到，新奇的題材則彌補了缺陷。主角互動有趣，讓人產生了閱讀慾望，大家跟我一起敲碗求Wendy更新吧！

望望的設定如果寫出來一定是史詩級作品，宏大的世界觀使人非常期待。(所以快寫吧！

抱歉這麼晚才公布名次，之前考試沒時間，懇請參加者見諒。

172.69.58.3

ns 172.69.58.3da2
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