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詞韻無言
ISSUE #452
Author: 霧飄山亭
詞韻無言
Author: 霧飄山亭
ISSUE #452
第四百五十二章<<繫裙腰.針子>>
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繒繡動，爾許對園中，綺疏簾外。

讓悶情千趟，離人拼湊徯待，裝點長久在。

堪紅爐煙薆，拾線獨，徙倚多麼，亂影移礙。

仍耐。

夜殘絹鎖，我是針呆留恨海。

爁微細、沉沉倦燭，懷君只無奈。

結圈線弄，只織錦、行行渲彩。

是淚目，織字孤單去睬。160Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB05cjyrf95

(解釋)

詠針。

<<繫裙腰.針兒>>其二160Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu6ZfYGVE6B

第8-10句：寫針織布時如人影拾線，徘徊往返

第14句：寫針如燭尖幼160Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvBG0hrkoJ4

第17句：化用<<璇璣圖>>之典

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音樂版

[粵韻填詞入曲]《織布針線》(原詞：《繫裙腰》)(粵語版)

[粵韻填詞入曲]《織布針線》(原詞：《繫裙腰》)

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其他

[粵韻填詞入曲]《星座傳說》(原詞：《如夢令》)(粵語版)

[粵韻填詞入曲]《星座傳說》(原詞：《如夢令》)

160Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc3mULhme8K

216.73.217.128

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詞韻無言
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Last updated: Jun 7, 2026
Total word count: 57,119
Total reading time: 190 Minutes
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霧飄山亭
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