長生劫(重編版)的《序》正式開始發佈時,才是八月。73Please respect copyright.PENANAk0zSILMW3d
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如今夏去冬來,春又復還,已是三月了。73Please respect copyright.PENANAeV3AnhJHX0
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也直到第一卷《青木覆雲》正式結束,我才敢出來跟大家打個招呼,原因無他,作為一個曾一度斷更的寫字人,實在是無顏面對讀者。73Please respect copyright.PENANA9P6Yz7zWtI
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於是,在準備長生劫【重編版】的時候,我暗地裡下定了一個決心,就算長生劫(重編版)寫得再爛,好歹也必須寫完第一卷跟間章,甚至一路寫下去,寫到第二卷,第三卷,直到星湖的盡頭才可以。73Please respect copyright.PENANAsqY1NucN8K
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於是,《青木覆雲》寫是寫完了,勉強算是踏出了一步。73Please respect copyright.PENANAB7K6zSIMpl
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但觀看數很慘淡就是了。73Please respect copyright.PENANAIc1QN3RBQv
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不過嘛,這本小說的慘淡我本來就做好了心理準備,如今這般狀況,也算是我自尋死路,畢竟這本小說是一本走群像劇形式的小說,作者還更新的很慢。73Please respect copyright.PENANAgv994FzZrC
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仔細想想,這種故事會獲得很好的成績,才是奇怪。73Please respect copyright.PENANARqo27lmboW
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看到這裡,可能會有人問了:既然如此,那你為何還要寫下去呢?73Please respect copyright.PENANASb8DogpG0p
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我引用George Mallory在嘗試攀登珠穆朗瑪峰時所說的名言:Because it's there.73Please respect copyright.PENANAd9J4KipVRd
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因為這個故事存在在我的腦海裡。73Please respect copyright.PENANApMambFwK7d
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寫作注定是孤獨的,長夜雖漫,但仍有朋友願意與我同行,在不斷的挫折和磨煉中,你們的支持才是我繼續前行的動力。73Please respect copyright.PENANAoujgJJG8V6
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在此感謝幫我對稿的賢仔,幫手看小說和給予意見的祖祖,還有一開始免費幫我畫插圖的麒麟,《長生劫》和我能一路前行至此,絕對少不了你們的功勞。73Please respect copyright.PENANAzAHoi8gyHU
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當然,還有各位讀者,非常感謝你們,如果覺得我寫得還不錯,願意用一點時間幫我一把的話,請留下你們的「Like」,最好Like埋IG,給你們的朋友推薦這故事,感謝大家。73Please respect copyright.PENANAhE7pWLTEFA
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宣傳結束了,是時候聊一下有關《青木覆雲》的事情了。73Please respect copyright.PENANAQ2d3uVKXGL
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在我斷更的時間中,我曾非常認真的考慮過棄坑,但奈何青燐這廝上蹦下跳,總究是讓我放不下筆。73Please respect copyright.PENANAr74q8IftBT
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但當我認真想下筆接著寫的時候,卻發現第一卷有很多的設定很奇怪,如果有人看過舊版的長生劫的話,一定還會記得聖教、聖窗等一連串西方元素的設定。老實說,在現在的我看來……有些設定,確實有些尷尬。73Please respect copyright.PENANAQJiytNXBid
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說白了,就是有一種長大後的我看自己小時候寫的中二筆記的羞恥感。73Please respect copyright.PENANAUwVXozvv3c
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於是為了取代這些設定,道紋,儒教等設定隨即被推了出來,而你一定都能看出,這本書的西方元素,全都被取走了。73Please respect copyright.PENANAAOPTS6XWkq
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因為我覺得,光是東方武俠玄幻的元素,就讓我有些吃不消了,更何況要將西方元素加進去,這種行為簡直就是在表演「寫作人自殺的101種方法」……73Please respect copyright.PENANAQaYH9nBULz
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於是,故事中多了個叫宋一和李光義的小孩。73Please respect copyright.PENANA9W9tEWqWdi
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說起來,宋一和李光義的出現,其一是想補全「青木村」當地的視角,加強最後慘劇發生後的悲壯感,我希望讀者在看到林松蔭那座血肉祭台時,能有更大的情感波動。73Please respect copyright.PENANAmdVoDv5vQA
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我希望他們是活生生的人,而不是「青木村民」,正如故事中許多角色,他們也許有黑暗的一面,也許有卑劣的一面,你們可以不同意他們所做的事,但也希望你們能理解他們做出選擇的原因。73Please respect copyright.PENANAcEhGJJTsXq
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但當然,話說得很美,但做不做得來就是另一回事了……73Please respect copyright.PENANAahSwRk3v18
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例如說,宋一和李光義原本的設計是讓他們作為河木和陳犁雲這對曾經的摯友的對照,河木最後的一句「青木村總算出了個讀書人和大俠。」,本來希望能做出一種前後呼應的效果,讓宋一和李光義成為了河木和陳犁雲終究無法成為的人……但由於筆力所限,讓這一點無法表現出來,也是讓我扼腕嘆息。73Please respect copyright.PENANAkv3mqxGu2l
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如此種種,讓我感到極為惋惜的地方,還有很多,但都因為個人筆力所限或篇幅問題,就不展開來訴說了。73Please respect copyright.PENANAC0m3hWUNu9
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說是說有很多瑕疵,但總括而言,我對《青木覆雲》重製版還是很滿意的,就像是我每天在罵賽馬娘只會靠賽,正一垃圾驚,但每天還是開心玩著一樣。73Please respect copyright.PENANAEJpo3vPN3d
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……又說遠了,我們說完了過去,也是時候展望將來了。73Please respect copyright.PENANAlRcvssHE8c
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在第一卷《青木覆雲》之後,故事舞台會由北方轉換成遙遠的南方,時間大概會在憐昕進村的十多天之前,講述在商朝首府永京的故事。73Please respect copyright.PENANAJfMLydxXza
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第二卷的故事大綱還在撰寫之中,但在第二卷之前,還會有兩篇間章供各位觀看,第一篇自然是舊讀者都看過的《伊人念愁》重編版,第二篇便會是一直都沒有公開過的間章《將至未至》,其中,《伊人念愁》是一篇短篇故事,《將至未至》則稍長一些,共有七節。如果繪師能及時完成插畫的話,明天就會以一星期一更的方式連載。73Please respect copyright.PENANAvykP2U2dKa
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在兩篇間章之後,大概會有一個月的休刊期,希望到時候,長生劫第二卷已經準備好與大家見面。73Please respect copyright.PENANA6U3po93rSp
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青山不改,綠水長流。73Please respect copyright.PENANASNw9Th0N5E
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我們長生劫 第二卷《永京冬至》再見。73Please respect copyright.PENANAP55XByQS1S
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