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(Discontinued) A Story with Mistaeks
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DISCONTINUED. Last written: April 2015.


Join Aegrov Talisman in the distant future as he fights against an enemy strong enough to take a corner of the Milky Way galaxy and cause the extinction of an entire sentient species while enslaving another species. Watch him progress from an upper-class outcast to a fighter for freedom with his companions, the Manor alien-slave Ella, his sister Alician Talisman, Minor-Major Ramar, the mechanic Joies Card, the slave Dusk, the soldier Dawn, and the veteran Dorman Sickle.

Will Aegrov allow his defenses down when near his close friends, Ella, Joies, and Dawn? What will come of it? Will he allow a grudge against fellow Minor-Major Ramar judge his actions in battle? Will he risk his life to save a slave such as Dusk? What can he learn from a war veteran like Dorman? Can he protect his sister, Alician? Discover it all in this story with mistakes!

Okay, so this story came about in my freshman year of high school (I'm a senior now) and I winged it as I went on in the story. It's kind of jumbled. There may be errors in it somewhere, but I can take care of that if you point them out. I'm thinking of doing an entire revamp of the story, which will take a while. Bear with me please, will ya?

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