Ahhh competitors,
You sparked my imagination with your worlds, took me for the ride. I'm impressed by the response and hope you had as much fun writing as I did reading! 771Please respect copyright.PENANAJSt2CpkKmA
Stefani you are very much a dark horse. The way you describe events and keep us moving through the storyline is compelling. You're a very thorough writer - very impressive. I love that you changed my view of your protagonist on it's head.
Ennastark, you're a writer that I look out for - simply because everything you write is never the same. I'm curious where you'll take these two characters, and how you included an iconic villain into a modern setting. 771Please respect copyright.PENANALJev0jVbzc
Catch me if you can, I can't keep up with you! I want to find out what this world is all about! You caught me and dragged me along, sparking interest quickly. You seem to give your readers enough information to follow - but not too much so we get bogged down in it. What's so important about this world that your protagonist had to go through such a process to get there?!?! 771Please respect copyright.PENANApaG8pMGKZH
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Special note:
Comrade you seem to have a strange gift for a kind of writing that is almost symbolic and fairy tale. The way you describe things is so visual that you get your point across well.
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