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重回舊地
ISSUE #3
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Jul 13, 2018
重回舊地
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Published:
Jul 13, 2018
ISSUE #3
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No Plagiarism!zr2Usgo3k6jELsXyWzQwposted on PＥNAＮＡ

今天盡力的把廣東話的故事轉成書面語，仔細看一年前的作品，沒有肉麻、恐怖，嘔心等症狀，想法意念通通都沒有問題。106Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVorUW7dh7t

我想要表達的都表達出來，看得出自己一年前和一年後的進步，語句、意境和對話等等現在更加得心應手。

我選擇用和廣東話版本無偏差和修飾的方法去改成書面語，不想有太大的分別，忠於自己當時的拙劣、才能找到現在較好的優點。

這一個故事是挑戰自己的耐心和記憶，一年了、也寫完一半了，總算沒有放棄。

沒想到這一篇三千多個字我改了一整天。106Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOOgDlcNHcr

媽啊...我昨天廣東話第四篇的結局是用了九千三百幾個字，完蛋了...

【廣東話的版本在紙言—搜尋小塵】

【稀少人數的FB&IG—搜尋@siuchanallergy】

172.70.131.179

ns 172.70.131.179da2
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Last updated: Jul 15, 2018
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