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古風詩詞
ISSUE #24
Author: 霧飄山亭
古風詩詞
Author: 霧飄山亭
ISSUE #24
笫二十四章<<高城>>
No Plagiarism!YGJfseH7UXiOV7RAiQqDposted on PＥNAＮＡ

無言步階砌高樓945Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsb5YFN0iXi

皺看俯視點星留

望斷不到黃昏頭

畫屏把煙雨風收

人悄悄輕雷迢流

暖了台間冷了愁

雨僝雲僽那知否

憑仗迷惘乾淚惆

(解釋)

(現在城市化,形成高樓密伂,夜不見星,屏風效應,溫室效應,以車代步)

獨上高樓

俯看才看到星(燈火蓋星)

燈火太亮,不見黃昏

畫屏(屏風效應),使無風雨

以車代步(輕雷即車聲)

晚上還是暖的,我心卻寒

危機快至知道嗎(雨僝雲僽即風吹雨打,代危機)?

用心的迷惘吹乾淚眼,但仍為此城惆悵945Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXXacOZsOLc

216.73.216.75

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古風詩詞
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Last updated: Jun 21, 2024
Total word count: 16,045
Total reading time: 53 Minutes
Writer:
霧飄山亭
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