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- 異色曈子 -
ENTRY #18
Author: 逆風狂楚
Published:
Jun 3, 2018
- 異色曈子 -
Published:
Jun 3, 2018
ENTRY #18
汝風留名 自評
Author: 逆風狂楚
Published:
Jun 3, 2018
1 Min Read
68 Words
No Plagiarism!JJgT0UiyrJDJOh915lGSposted on PＥNAＮＡ

一名參賽者評論了自己的作品，如下：623Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVbjzGwJUvA

優點：能夠間接嘲諷現代社會。623Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2dSTPAImsk

缺點：文筆不夠豐富。623Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjMUJwIcIwV

請大家幫他找出可以豐富文筆的方法。623Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRoO9eh5JLJ

P.s. 此篇章在徵得參賽者同意之後發佈。623Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcL521IKTyn

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