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- 異色曈子 -
ENTRY #14
Author: 逆風狂楚
Published:
Jun 3, 2018
- 異色曈子 -
Published:
Jun 3, 2018
ENTRY #14
瑟雷伊.幻夢 自評
Author: 逆風狂楚
Published:
Jun 3, 2018
1 Min Read
88 Words
No Plagiarism!P1i193WXCiQIHwK5jka9posted on PＥNAＮＡ

一名參賽者評論了自己的作品，但是他只看到自己的缺點，如下：

第一：沒有靈魂。352Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8pQvdDEqOx

第二：沒有令人感到有趣的地方。352Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyQqdOTpvpp

第三：斷句十分詭異。352Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKm1jjiJ3UO

第四：結尾廢話太多。

請大家幫他找出優點吧！

P.s. 此篇章在徵得參賽者同意之後發佈。352Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRIDVFxyhJR

172.69.7.101

ns 172.69.7.101da2
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