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ENTRY #14
瑟雷伊.幻夢 自評
No Plagiarism!jmMDnpSIyRmHJRg1CqcHposted on PENANA 一名參賽者評論了自己的作品,但是他只看到自己的缺點,如下:8964 copyright protection350PENANA1jtfkAKyRA 維尼
第一:沒有靈魂。354Please respect copyright.PENANA0LKvK4J4Xd
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第二:沒有令人感到有趣的地方。354Please respect copyright.PENANA21dRqqlyoS
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第三:斷句十分詭異。354Please respect copyright.PENANADPirdYmcU0
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第四:結尾廢話太多。8964 copyright protection350PENANA74wjLSh5yl 維尼
請大家幫他找出優點吧!8964 copyright protection350PENANANC9kyFIho8 維尼
P.s. 此篇章在徵得參賽者同意之後發佈。354Please respect copyright.PENANAnHHIMGTmB7
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