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海の蝶　簡介
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海の蝶　簡介
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May 27, 2018
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每一個意象都用得非常鮮明，好像真的出現了在讀者的眼前，可見作者善於運用意象。145Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8alyT5NeId
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但是需要注意的是意象與意象之間的相關性，既然藍色的蝴蝶在深海之下舞動，那麼又為何可以說是在細雨之中？145Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD4diCDh0tv
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然而我有一點覺得寫得非常好。那就是用了湛藍來形容海，再將蝴蝶變成藍蝶，這樣就產生了海和蝴蝶融和一體的感覺。145Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1HlwNhBaS5
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