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四季詩
ENTRY #3
Author: 三俞
Published:
May 28, 2018
四季詩
Published:
May 28, 2018
ENTRY #3
秋：悲人啼秋
Author: 三俞
Published:
May 28, 2018
1 Min Read
123 Words
No Plagiarism!H8yjw52qg653187JbkrZposted on PＥNAＮＡ 荷盡蟬哀鳴，月稀人怏病；

初是孟秋時，已然憂欲凍。

—————————分隔線—————————761Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVkFDJDWLXu

荷花已經凋謝，蟬兒唧唧發出悲哀的鳴叫，月亮的光芒迷濛，人們看來都是病怏怏的；這時候才剛是初秋時節，我不禁開始擔憂起冬日。

———————你好我又出現了———————761Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3WdjWrMH4K

此人第一次寫詩，感覺有點前後不相連(汗顏)，押韻對仗跟平仄真的好難！尤其是平仄，文筆渣勿噴！！！！！

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