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搞笑爛尾
ENTRY #6
Author: 日初日洛
Published:
May 25, 2018
搞笑爛尾
Published:
May 25, 2018
ENTRY #6
結語
Author: 日初日洛
Published:
May 25, 2018
1 Min Read
80 Words
No Plagiarism!jd80G1t73Sl3K1cy1qJfposted on PＥNAＮＡ

首先感謝各位挑戰者的參與！761Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx9Zq7FjVNq

#1 畫面感足，可惜結尾偏弱

#2 引人入勝，刪減伏筆會更驚喜

#3 轉折強烈，望能附上真結局

#4 加強結構平衡可謂渾然一體761Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLfhTPk8CPJ

#5 工整有序，稍感平淡

祝大家往後更喜愛寫作

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