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搞笑爛尾
ENTRY #6
Author: 日初日洛
Published:
May 26, 2018
搞笑爛尾
Published:
May 26, 2018
ENTRY #6
結語
Author: 日初日洛
Published:
May 26, 2018
1 Min Read
80 Words
No Plagiarism!cII08H81gGOskBIG2DGOposted on PＥNAＮＡ

首先感謝各位挑戰者的參與！499Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3iOdijfAM3

#1 畫面感足，可惜結尾偏弱

#2 引人入勝，刪減伏筆會更驚喜

#3 轉折強烈，望能附上真結局

#4 加強結構平衡可謂渾然一體499Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMNQ1sFs6aQ

#5 工整有序，稍感平淡

祝大家往後更喜愛寫作

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