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◉ 詭時 ◉
ENTRY #199
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Published:
May 3, 2018
◉ 詭時 ◉
Published:
May 3, 2018
ENTRY #199
評 198
Author:
Published:
May 3, 2018
1 Min Read
62 Words
No Plagiarism!Rf4Lp0bP18JQq9jz5awWposted on PＥNAＮＡ

評語

◉ 最重要的一點：微小說中的故事性不足！

◉ 不容易知道究竟是哪一個時段發生的事。

◉ 有一些問號如果變成感嘆號會更好。

◉ 其實社會和世界是有分別的。

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