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季節植株填詞
ENTRY #2
Author: 穹葉
Published:
Apr 30, 2018
季節植株填詞
Published:
Apr 30, 2018
ENTRY #2
《憶江南<千悲雪>》
Author: 穹葉
Published:
Apr 30, 2018
1 Min Read
267 Words
No Plagiarism!cmcDuR1Qr80tzye5VcTZposted on PＥNAＮＡ

千悲雪

花落憶春秋

梅展心抒逢摯友

寒窗白景盼情柔

空笑酒樽留

　　對了很久應該是沒有錯啦（笑）。主題是冬，故意沒有寫出「冬」這個字，但從千悲雪、回憶春與秋、梅花盛開、白景就可以得知是冬天。

　　另外梅展雙關用語是眉展。千悲雪如果聯想得出來的話是將雪比喻成酒，千悲雪，千杯酒（自己說）。內文等於標題我覺得挺好的。

　　冬季氣寒心冷，難得梅花盛開摯友來訪、把酒言歡，但友人總會離開，正如沒有一個人會永遠待在誰身邊，從結著寒霜的窗向外看去一片白茫，只盼友情的溫暖能夠存留，但是，人去樓空，獨留我與飲盡的空酒杯，以及這無盡的孤寂。

　　寫過詩寫過賦，就是沒寫過詞，而且還是這麼嚴格的啊啊啊（抱頭吶喊）。

　　不過也感謝版主給我這個磨練（胡鬧）的機會XD

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