第1點425Please respect copyright.PENANAilcdLeDZ39
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。425Please respect copyright.PENANAnE3OCSTE2q
第2點425Please respect copyright.PENANAOq3AVhiaAP
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。425Please respect copyright.PENANAXgaRgi7B2V
第3點425Please respect copyright.PENANAd2E8gXn8A4
例如:425Please respect copyright.PENANAMokAKOW4Ev
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。425Please respect copyright.PENANAKK0efoKMWr
「嗯──」425Please respect copyright.PENANACQiKb2ePGG
「該怎麼辦呢?」425Please respect copyright.PENANAQccD7l9VEB
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。425Please respect copyright.PENANAmOZPp2cBtC
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」425Please respect copyright.PENANA5l0C3xqRQY
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。425Please respect copyright.PENANAxiUEghq7on
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。425Please respect copyright.PENANAgxmXwD6CWy
例如:425Please respect copyright.PENANAomR9UPu3O1
米莉亞拿到一封信。425Please respect copyright.PENANAKxWvsUK6L8
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」425Please respect copyright.PENANAb803ffWrJ3
三河願表示。425Please respect copyright.PENANAMH5Vkh56oK
「那可是一封情書耶。」425Please respect copyright.PENANAjUkSACLuCp
第4點425Please respect copyright.PENANAEs9jGvjZIa
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。425Please respect copyright.PENANAgsslyiUKJ4


