第1點270Please respect copyright.PENANAAOZMwyRBn0
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。270Please respect copyright.PENANApqLXWKtuZ4
第2點270Please respect copyright.PENANAjyEQ5cFIkO
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。270Please respect copyright.PENANAKoVSvdezM1
第3點270Please respect copyright.PENANA42LekEUWWw
例如:270Please respect copyright.PENANAVRXkScAe7Z
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。270Please respect copyright.PENANADNGJw2oaLP
「嗯──」270Please respect copyright.PENANAdeJYprURXw
「該怎麼辦呢?」270Please respect copyright.PENANAHjbdKqxMpj
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。270Please respect copyright.PENANAgdYtyWwtck
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」270Please respect copyright.PENANAVSOn3V5oeB
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。270Please respect copyright.PENANA0Mn9kRxppR
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。270Please respect copyright.PENANAOKRGBPlW9a
例如:270Please respect copyright.PENANAMDlk1eFd4q
米莉亞拿到一封信。270Please respect copyright.PENANARrybmTbifh
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」270Please respect copyright.PENANAWQ5dKvNpI4
三河願表示。270Please respect copyright.PENANArfP9CkOxpv
「那可是一封情書耶。」270Please respect copyright.PENANALBKVt3V2Jw
第4點270Please respect copyright.PENANAqOW0rjpGZ4
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。270Please respect copyright.PENANABzc1gNMFGb