第1點317Please respect copyright.PENANAlqj0ApSLlz
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。317Please respect copyright.PENANAyTzB8zUiBy
第2點317Please respect copyright.PENANAea4jaeZYGQ
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。317Please respect copyright.PENANARLoozvVNje
第3點317Please respect copyright.PENANADQGvGBbzyp
例如:317Please respect copyright.PENANATAHHixrx7I
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。317Please respect copyright.PENANAwWq4nLeyev
「嗯──」317Please respect copyright.PENANA1XBSJ3ZWuD
「該怎麼辦呢?」317Please respect copyright.PENANAxd9Oifutfi
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。317Please respect copyright.PENANA4JF6TnuHQs
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」317Please respect copyright.PENANAni65HwRlLi
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。317Please respect copyright.PENANAuEJGFicUEg
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。317Please respect copyright.PENANAlosJVqXg3d
例如:317Please respect copyright.PENANAtIzdF8Uzqv
米莉亞拿到一封信。317Please respect copyright.PENANAOiaUtp8bJ8
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」317Please respect copyright.PENANAsg884Td7Om
三河願表示。317Please respect copyright.PENANA6vQW7TWB8I
「那可是一封情書耶。」317Please respect copyright.PENANA8M6v3DmRd5
第4點317Please respect copyright.PENANAaeXqntXR00
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。317Please respect copyright.PENANAQ7uZl2sJ6Z