第1點446Please respect copyright.PENANAmLfZELFkUm
在法爾米亞王國篇,寫法是一個人寫出動作再接上一句話,從毛絨部落篇開始 些微改變。446Please respect copyright.PENANAvs5CFRX70Y
第2點446Please respect copyright.PENANATWTa8UKzIf
改變得地方是,一句話可能分開變成多句,但是,同樣是一個人說得,並不會 造成這句話是誰說得,變成需要思考去誰說得,讓讀著能更順暢去閱讀。446Please respect copyright.PENANAIokGQ8XQjb
第3點446Please respect copyright.PENANAPONI4SPCU2
例如:446Please respect copyright.PENANAJlPG3dKEJE
米莉亞拿到了信,心裡想著。446Please respect copyright.PENANAE7C3AngzGG
「嗯──」446Please respect copyright.PENANAEqwZTHaceL
「該怎麼辦呢?」446Please respect copyright.PENANAY6p5WW9gCL
米莉亞把信捏成了一團。446Please respect copyright.PENANA6uovpyHCfH
「嘛──,算了,不管它了。」446Please respect copyright.PENANAEh8fA79Af4
變成了可能兩句話,與多描寫動作。446Please respect copyright.PENANAlw5l3hoO95
不會像法爾米亞王國篇,一個動作一個人,下一個就是不同種人的這種情形。446Please respect copyright.PENANAZVo5Dgsfcn
例如:446Please respect copyright.PENANANyCjxqRi0f
米莉亞拿到一封信。446Please respect copyright.PENANANWy5Og95XX
「嗯──,嘛──,算了,不管它了。」446Please respect copyright.PENANAH8fsQnO7gd
三河願表示。446Please respect copyright.PENANAqSU1PuyQrM
「那可是一封情書耶。」446Please respect copyright.PENANAE3pdpIQuX8
第4點446Please respect copyright.PENANASSY2LzJzyR
作者不是中文系畢業,所以可能比較詞窮,請包含,接下來是毛絨部落篇。446Please respect copyright.PENANAB8N7KX5qzt


