1. 當初是怎麼開始創作魔方的?747Please respect copyright.PENANAizIJGIoHke
747Please respect copyright.PENANApRFJjHlyPG
747Please respect copyright.PENANA9H8fxnMpHi
《魔方》的原型在 2016 年的年中成型。一開始計畫做成人對人的動作劇,也就是好蛋 vs 壞蛋那種。747Please respect copyright.PENANANckeqCJLUs
747Please respect copyright.PENANAwTQq1kKavc
但是正反派我很難定義,換句話說,因為立場不同而造成對立的情況,很難說誰對誰錯。就像樓梯,可以上去也可以下去。747Please respect copyright.PENANADdve8CqIb5
747Please respect copyright.PENANA22B5WovK6W
身為說書人,應該處在中立一方,讓讀者自行判斷角色立場。由於人類實在太難駕馭,於是我捨棄人,改用集一切毀滅於一身的怪獸作反派。《魔方》的初始架構才算建立完成。747Please respect copyright.PENANAMYoRBOniNr
747Please respect copyright.PENANA7upvXAACH3
故事的模組出來後,我開始想該用什麼方式呈現它。原先的構想是做成隨筆漫畫,給自己和家人娛樂用。但是才試畫幾筆便發現太高估自身能力。怪獸被我畫的跟突變人類猛男一樣,到最後誰是(突變)人類,誰是怪獸(猛男),自己也分不出來。747Please respect copyright.PENANAI9f9Ja3DKy
747Please respect copyright.PENANAm3O1mBl599
漫畫化的計畫於是被埋在行事曆底下。直到 2017 年的年初,突然頓悟可以用寫的把故事寫出來,於是就開始了怪獸世界的文字冒險。747Please respect copyright.PENANAn7XCsKMq1M
747Please respect copyright.PENANAXPqkaNyKuQ
747Please respect copyright.PENANARvuv97oi9G
747Please respect copyright.PENANAj9iLxGqPXZ
2. 魔方裡面的各個設定的靈感是從何而來?747Please respect copyright.PENANA3BodjhsmqZ
747Please respect copyright.PENANAdHKtsrs9VY
747Please respect copyright.PENANA3a3j4RxpfV
設定的靈感來源非常多元。大都是從書上和網路汲取,再加上自身想像。不過我對設定有一個堅持,那就是盡可能在合乎常理、常人會作出的行為範圍內做設計。747Please respect copyright.PENANALKUF1QBFvM
747Please respect copyright.PENANAQhoti4xM3Q
以「魔方四軍種」為例,我在參考了二戰的德國閃擊戰、以及《環太平洋》對抗怪獸的作戰後,簡易擺上「戰車」、「火砲」、「捕獸網」,構成基本狙殺異獸組合。隨後以其為基底,疊加了諸多設計在其中,最後便是「載具員」、「武器員」、「防護員」,以及「機擬員」等最終設定出爐。747Please respect copyright.PENANAe4t6o8yhKe
747Please respect copyright.PENANAOJYO4TRG7t
我認為引人共鳴的設定,盡可能要簡單純粹。儘管在複雜的包裝下,一定也要有單純的骨架支撐整體。不要落入愈複雜就愈強大的窠臼。747Please respect copyright.PENANAM2WAgwI5dF
747Please respect copyright.PENANASYMmFf0oIz
747Please respect copyright.PENANAe3Nr1497vn
3. 如何讓人物的對話顯得生動自然747Please respect copyright.PENANAaGmN5Bi4BD
747Please respect copyright.PENANA1vew1pYxzl
747Please respect copyright.PENANAGFIWGmz8gJ
其實「生動」的寫法我也還在琢磨。要把紙上人物的對話,寫得好像就在面前講話一樣,單只用文字描述,在某些狀況對我而言依舊有難度。暫且先且戰且走吧!747Please respect copyright.PENANAk2fsVpkted
747Please respect copyright.PENANAOZJtFHeDAp
關於「自然」,我的淺見是多去看現實人類的互動。偶像劇、動漫的人物互動有些都太過浮誇,做出的反應和對話往往超出常理。看多了會不切實際。747Please respect copyright.PENANAp9AUrwIvdT
747Please respect copyright.PENANAYhZwDsiv3v
多跟家人同學同事聊天。從事服務業的更能利用職務之便,觀看各種奇人異士。747Please respect copyright.PENANAzXXUnP8Lq2
747Please respect copyright.PENANAIlJaLigoP2
閒暇時可以看看各行各業的人物專訪。了解那行的行事作風;學習人物的用詞語氣;模仿從事時的動作反應,對貼近自然或多或少有幫助。747Please respect copyright.PENANAkhoCgIAAG4
747Please respect copyright.PENANATI8YhBPtIb
747Please respect copyright.PENANAY3CuQ1lQml
747Please respect copyright.PENANAO5Y2Jf8f6H
4. 近期目標747Please respect copyright.PENANAsQL5q1MvQW
747Please respect copyright.PENANAKrUv15O2ba
747Please respect copyright.PENANAPsT2L7dh0E
希望能在今年九月前完成《魔方》第二部上半部。這系列預計有四部,外加一部外傳。估計會用掉上百萬字和作者青春。747Please respect copyright.PENANAy1bygrsLNr
747Please respect copyright.PENANARNVRfthyhc
這將是非常龐大的工程,期望能盡快完成。747Please respect copyright.PENANA2mqHleZ8hK
747Please respect copyright.PENANADphONYd5dK
747Please respect copyright.PENANAyBIJgkGY6B
747Please respect copyright.PENANASR4rxuBBh7
5. 給其他新手作者的建議?747Please respect copyright.PENANAAMj83cGGF3
747Please respect copyright.PENANAcSMZfT20AS
747Please respect copyright.PENANAoHDgGigsMX
如果可以,盡可能為自己的小說蒐集相關資料。當資料愈貼近事實,愈能引人入勝。假如今天要寫跟籃球有關的故事,你應該要知道籃球的場地、規則、技巧,而不是靠自己腦補出這些既有的東西。747Please respect copyright.PENANAH6upCqysg1
747Please respect copyright.PENANAqG1QWyBh0V
靠資料輔助撰寫不會讓故事落入俗套,除非是照本宣科。在小說中導入適當資訊,加強故事的可信度;說服讀者「相信」故事,進而去接受你創造的世界。747Please respect copyright.PENANAP1yodbVvmn
747Please respect copyright.PENANASeuhLkMl1m
以上說的就是我目前努力的方向。常常寫到一些場景,譬如火車運行時,因為我沒開過火車,所以只能寫出「我駕駛火車前進」這種單調描述。不過如果去查相關資料,知道火車行駛要靠號誌運轉、行車調度、會車避讓等作業,寫起來就好像作者有開過火車呢!747Please respect copyright.PENANANJaWIUTxl4
747Please respect copyright.PENANAje485Q766q
當然沒有這麼簡單!上述絕對是誇大。總之,這都是我在接觸寫作後體悟到的事。不過感受和做法是因人而異的。你應該以寫出自己喜歡的故事為最終目標,為了找到通往這個目標的方法,多方嘗試,直到達成。747Please respect copyright.PENANA4P9CoNwTZ5
747Please respect copyright.PENANAfFvGgRMTvz
747Please respect copyright.PENANANVZKwSNYSp
arrow_back
作者訪問
more_vert
-
info_outline Info
-
toc Table of Contents
-
share Share
-
format_color_text Display Settings
-
exposure_plus_1 Recommend
-
report_problem Report
-
account_circle Login
Search stories, writers or societies
Continue ReadingClear All
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
作者訪問
Author:
楓星
Published:
May 12, 2018
ISSUE #14
作者訪問-Uncle_Sold[純文字內文]
LIKES 3
READS 743
BOOKMARKS 9
Suggest Edits
Login with Facebook
or Sign up/Login to comment or bookmark! Click to load the next chapter
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:
Font Size:
Line Spacing:
Paragraph Spacing:
Load the next issue automatically
Reset to default
×
People Who Like This
x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.

