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《融合。元素。創作。挑戰》（含超級挑戰）
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Dec 22, 2017
《融合。元素。創作。挑戰》（含超級挑戰）
Published:
Dec 22, 2017
ENTRY #2
【CHAPTER 1 評語】
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Dec 22, 2017
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No Plagiarism!WWVU0leCQNkqBIhRr9Q1posted on PＥNAＮＡ

評語

1.）標題格式完全正確。【 +5 】

2.）字數多於一千字。【 +5 】

3.）一叫出名字，便會將魅魔招來的設定非常有趣。【 +10 】

4.）小說並不完整。【 -10 】

5.）不太有戰爭和繁華的感覺。【 -10 】

6.1）最終分數在最後決定，此部分最後得出分數 =0 。

6.2）最終分數不會有變動。

7.）於截止前，仍然可以修改小說內容。加油！

8.）以上初步評分，在本人與各評判商議後，始會正式發出評分。

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