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超武鬥組 第一章:畜牲集團
Author:
周輝
超武鬥組 第一章:畜牲集團
Author:
周輝
ISSUE #80
第一章 更新
No Plagiarism!90ARqafgLK6FyMyVbTFyposted on PENANA 終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:8964 copyright protection428PENANANKU2KGXqYQ 維尼
角色改名432Please respect copyright.PENANAdZvu1m4jkJ
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:8964 copyright protection428PENANAtN87r1lwB1 維尼
何大力->南昌一絕432Please respect copyright.PENANA6tiq48IhaI
劉元山->海柏432Please respect copyright.PENANAT8oUx1I6Ti
陳生->曉尚432Please respect copyright.PENANAEFowcFc2DJ
李生->曉珀432Please respect copyright.PENANA9AU792hZoX
嚴生->迎豐432Please respect copyright.PENANA142GaB3E9B
史生->富薈432Please respect copyright.PENANAz8iAF3g2HC
林生->傲形432Please respect copyright.PENANA8uSLRi88ha
黃生->利奧432Please respect copyright.PENANAvh6AbarItD
張生->曉岸8964 copyright protection428PENANARXvc8EBlBT 維尼
執文法432Please respect copyright.PENANAgIJ0Z8XEIm
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。432Please respect copyright.PENANAdEaLVFpIb7
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