終完修正完第一章。改動的地方如下:
角色改名435Please respect copyright.PENANAPy3YKWD5kL
除了玄牛之外,所有畜牲集團的戰士都重新命名,因為那些陳生、李生、等等的命名,亂來之餘,又不符合作品性格。所以有以下改動:
何大力->南昌一絕435Please respect copyright.PENANAvNSq8Rp4f4
劉元山->海柏435Please respect copyright.PENANAnZGlBDev5I
陳生->曉尚435Please respect copyright.PENANAlBlBZxGDAy
李生->曉珀435Please respect copyright.PENANAofQ7yd45Ga
嚴生->迎豐435Please respect copyright.PENANAevY9zwGWEx
史生->富薈435Please respect copyright.PENANA1CpPVBkfEG
林生->傲形435Please respect copyright.PENANAOKvZmmkrv4
黃生->利奧435Please respect copyright.PENANAzu8w4xrwUj
張生->曉岸
執文法435Please respect copyright.PENANAlQBIYJuwOP
也許是小弟進步了,現在回看第一章,文法竟是那麼糟糕,是以也大幅修正。435Please respect copyright.PENANAcyVQ3dp9hX