Hello everyone. Thank you for being a part of my first contest. My judging factors were partly grammer and spelling and the feels factor. I'm probably overthinking it, but I came up with results that were satisfactory for me. I'm such a Grammar Nazi, when it comes to other people's writing, of course.982Please respect copyright.PENANAGlP4PCsvXL
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1st place- #6 by SilverSpoons.982Please respect copyright.PENANAcji8ulQScI
I really identified with this one. It really spoke to me on some of my own fears. It had some pretty good feels to it, but for most every other sad thing, I didn't cry. Sorry. I didn't notice anything wrong with your grammar or spelling. Great job, and thumbs up! Keep up the great work!982Please respect copyright.PENANAGukUoNkgHr
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2nd place #3 by XXjoeyXX. This was very strong on the emotion and perspective. You related your childhood experiences with your current fears. I wanted to cry, but I couldn't. This would have made easy first if it wasn't for some missed spelling and grammar. I really loved it, but because of the Grammar Nazi that I am, I struggled with giving you 2nd instead of 1st. Keep up the great work, and continue to improve your writing!
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3rd place #8 by Bluemoon Scriptor. I really enjoyed reading yours. It was very unique compared to other entries on that it held a different perspective. Someone whose very fear was his strength. Sorta dare-devilish in a way with the examples and comparisons given. Grammar and spelling were good, but there were some sentences that I wasn't quite sure of their meaning. Keep up the great work give it your all!982Please respect copyright.PENANAzbInlhnH0I
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While I would love to include comments about everyone else's entries, I don't have a ton of time and this is already getting long. Mainly, there were grammar problems and some didn't make sense in some aspects. It was hard to choose. I wish there were more than just three places. I really enjoyed reading all of what you had to say. Keep up the awesome work and always keep improving your writing and clarity!982Please respect copyright.PENANAUODvxbjH92
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Thanks again for your participation! ^-^982Please respect copyright.PENANAGYcWsNPfeN
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