A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAAIxwubVspO
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—481Please respect copyright.PENANAnzSuZcteeK
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAb2INC9XtAH
你指標題?481Please respect copyright.PENANAUrN5xR3zsw
但有時訂標題也很困難~481Please respect copyright.PENANAyReq438KRv
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANATQJTuVIx1i
嗯對啊,481Please respect copyright.PENANAWKO7t8plOS
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAvnLaCBZY3u
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,481Please respect copyright.PENANAyuKAYtw3cp
所以沒有中心思想在。481Please respect copyright.PENANA6q595eQseE
我猜的對嗎?
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAREkqfbLUgI
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。481Please respect copyright.PENANAyd2OtLZB9s
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?481Please respect copyright.PENANAlSNNtMqIwL
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANA1CrgwAR7ub
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!481Please respect copyright.PENANAWaMszl8r85
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAODPRJw43iq
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAmHlfGuzerc
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD481Please respect copyright.PENANAh9ayAktFVC
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。481Please respect copyright.PENANAOeaUUWBxnq
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,481Please respect copyright.PENANAKjgmKNaxEe
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAWiFbmBtLJX
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。481Please respect copyright.PENANAIj9K7AZ1i5
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。481Please respect copyright.PENANAX1HqJzHlhW
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAec0gpZsgVc
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。481Please respect copyright.PENANAVOexZKxnqH
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAwUNmxCnFe0
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANADLGWeLrVxH
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAWTkj4H7iv4
好啊。
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAgW0AWUXLwT
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。481Please respect copyright.PENANA2FXfKR887c
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。481Please respect copyright.PENANAXXJkDo4UcI
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。481Please respect copyright.PENANAZJBAJVFmLi
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAV75czj9AZm
好的,481Please respect copyright.PENANANdp09ybzzg
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、481Please respect copyright.PENANAwaHnJQ5G2Q
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANA58IZss8uD9
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,481Please respect copyright.PENANAzIizLOHdyS
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANABdh8obipGr
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAeps6PQlBuj
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。481Please respect copyright.PENANATVs3dQlGWD
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料481Please respect copyright.PENANAEwfRmp0kd4
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。481Please respect copyright.PENANAgS36DHIKSc
比如:481Please respect copyright.PENANAGloF11vQpn
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。481Please respect copyright.PENANAhMU3HtV9xm
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。481Please respect copyright.PENANAxOAVxVCAdT
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAE87CjSKOhy
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAx94NL8FqI6
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAexcGAXbxOd
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAlcRhKNUF0m
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係481Please respect copyright.PENANAgOoYp2eiZJ
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAmgI6tn9slm
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANA54hNOUo0Dd
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,481Please respect copyright.PENANA2IvioqnMQQ
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAm6gK7GQaeT
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAPuQ1cLWQNa
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:481Please respect copyright.PENANASoVtuTTrIP
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。481Please respect copyright.PENANAUexE17GPNI
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAoOrAaczeTh
哦~
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAEsNfb9Ab6F
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:481Please respect copyright.PENANABBei2slYIV
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)481Please respect copyright.PENANAfwJyF2779G
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)481Please respect copyright.PENANAiLnzi3rVGR
的故事
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANA2vQYaRTxfJ
好的、481Please respect copyright.PENANA72IvDFLIbA
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAoITfEm5zRE
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANA8fJHKBstY9
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAtm2Gm9Aecn
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAYdzCA4kkqT
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAjbkA7lGOBM
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAUlTNcvfsNW
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:481Please respect copyright.PENANAYuCPTsU3T5
1.『爭執』481Please respect copyright.PENANApiWjUoPn2I
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』481Please respect copyright.PENANAS7kn1FpEIv
3.『分手的情人(主角)』481Please respect copyright.PENANAn0fkWkgOwR
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』481Please respect copyright.PENANAbcS6gg857q
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANASULWujraMW
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAYaayhDyaG5
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANA9kqZOwfegg
那如果加入復仇呢481Please respect copyright.PENANAUj2aI53MXY
搶她大姐的未婚夫481Please respect copyright.PENANA70fmHnkg3K
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANA4tAbbTQclq
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了481Please respect copyright.PENANAFJbS7wIaXK
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……481Please respect copyright.PENANAO7b9BNx2gt
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANArcdK3Mbi2u
好的,了解啦
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANACtvOy6Z90y
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAhTDFMUPh72
不一定要有吧~?481Please respect copyright.PENANAvtltTOabZ0
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAgSljLgyakk
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANANUvJ0qD1iJ
比如481Please respect copyright.PENANAaKZMTCgMhE
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』481Please respect copyright.PENANAhgqqMirYTp
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAVq9hnMVn5f
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!481Please respect copyright.PENANAHbGpfaDN7y
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD481Please respect copyright.PENANAj2jRel1iNa
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAvP11WPu807
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 481Please respect copyright.PENANA3vVZzabSFZ
A君:481Please respect copyright.PENANAlUCUcVi6Fq
你好厲害啊!481Please respect copyright.PENANAvoEkD7f5bs
(重新把故事編排)481Please respect copyright.PENANA7JwqEDCU1x
龍晨P:481Please respect copyright.PENANAn8VzS727xX
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~481Please respect copyright.PENANAUNSVlLopX7