A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAW4logqkv6M
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—580Please respect copyright.PENANA3BgBleMwgU
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAkaRZN0UnLU
你指標題?580Please respect copyright.PENANAcgp6VHwkz0
但有時訂標題也很困難~580Please respect copyright.PENANA6gd5Xn6oYx
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANALU0wLWYkbk
嗯對啊,580Please respect copyright.PENANAMX9mG6Tbpr
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANA6zIMdLm5R8
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,580Please respect copyright.PENANAmutXiE3WL8
所以沒有中心思想在。580Please respect copyright.PENANAwAr7AXYdI1
我猜的對嗎?
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAPtRZ2EsmH9
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。580Please respect copyright.PENANAqmyJZxmxJ8
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?580Please respect copyright.PENANAIK1mzxVKYf
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANASLyJMH6gAm
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!580Please respect copyright.PENANAZZvjiFnutf
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANABFV7CXKMsC
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANA5htXxKsoUQ
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD580Please respect copyright.PENANASwv2Hi2EwN
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。580Please respect copyright.PENANA6iJwoosibf
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,580Please respect copyright.PENANA65ah1NqWIQ
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANA7cEoBp3L6S
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。580Please respect copyright.PENANAmwUEiZcCLP
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。580Please respect copyright.PENANAIQ4YHDlDRP
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAHFy8rzRkbS
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。580Please respect copyright.PENANAfcXHVoRrt0
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAHR738RinpX
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAFkANXEozJw
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAQUXhHxSz6R
好啊。
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAXjaoodhvgX
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。580Please respect copyright.PENANAgrIiNdQ6ef
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。580Please respect copyright.PENANAzRCvQjYWWe
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。580Please respect copyright.PENANAgK4wG5Nqd5
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAHvrpqWq6A1
好的,580Please respect copyright.PENANAHThvXiCOqv
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、580Please respect copyright.PENANAx5BcoTEJmM
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAyb5huu8bJL
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,580Please respect copyright.PENANAVWOj4mYRZ4
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAm4mx9qxivZ
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAW6XLYo8nuu
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。580Please respect copyright.PENANAYkiXjC78cW
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料580Please respect copyright.PENANAG7fFrSP26w
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。580Please respect copyright.PENANA3Yab5W1CPr
比如:580Please respect copyright.PENANAAFXXPCiZVA
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。580Please respect copyright.PENANA1lj4tvp5iX
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。580Please respect copyright.PENANAstfNr6ZrBb
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANA0eN0SQoRyB
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAsn8LOsxFHZ
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAPdtPKMf2Lv
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAOT2VHyntE2
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係580Please respect copyright.PENANAEUkuKwiJlT
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAf4ZouBNW5i
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAbLMnmKqqqU
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,580Please respect copyright.PENANAirImigqX7r
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANA5tZyb4WafR
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAs0F5yTxxej
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:580Please respect copyright.PENANAUClN7fwG14
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。580Please respect copyright.PENANAPgCyatHfKm
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAjli6TDocHV
哦~
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAdJbbV9HdGc
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:580Please respect copyright.PENANAWCfU0OgC6N
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)580Please respect copyright.PENANA6l6uTD7VDS
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)580Please respect copyright.PENANA5gFQ10Jw0A
的故事
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAELNkAZSLGw
好的、580Please respect copyright.PENANAOHF1l2wJvm
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAmehUXBXY47
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANADkR6A8LLSJ
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAPHqwj0hKPO
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANATfyEPorzdH
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANASsjT05eOxU
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAStFGhf4WB0
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:580Please respect copyright.PENANAJuFnjwAAng
1.『爭執』580Please respect copyright.PENANAj8RhVR6puk
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』580Please respect copyright.PENANA9NOrNB0uep
3.『分手的情人(主角)』580Please respect copyright.PENANA38TTTT6brK
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』580Please respect copyright.PENANAoKU5UB4YMW
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAtkpaj1JBm0
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANA9jKN4pD9kh
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAN5jRhmysYt
那如果加入復仇呢580Please respect copyright.PENANAgMoGzEV2Xd
搶她大姐的未婚夫580Please respect copyright.PENANAHyVdFkBtzB
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAMeNuyxY1kU
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了580Please respect copyright.PENANAK59mWCDaM7
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……580Please respect copyright.PENANAJeZsQvgT5U
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAsxzzyDteDn
好的,了解啦
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAze3n65VldN
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAgUWFWrpLIJ
不一定要有吧~?580Please respect copyright.PENANA6Cv4XWWM7q
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANA9SU5W01Z0N
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANA3xd8ChoQ4v
比如580Please respect copyright.PENANAnDasH5ptSW
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』580Please respect copyright.PENANAtKUSXRB2eT
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAGob1btpApN
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!580Please respect copyright.PENANAXnodScLOAY
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD580Please respect copyright.PENANAAQxKjBkfin
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAqA3JqVdz7S
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 580Please respect copyright.PENANAqhOnyTCDSu
A君:580Please respect copyright.PENANAgxBWqDwso1
你好厲害啊!580Please respect copyright.PENANApaGGhlmW1c
(重新把故事編排)580Please respect copyright.PENANAboUQzRzK5d
龍晨P:580Please respect copyright.PENANAworeFYRY34
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~580Please respect copyright.PENANACf8p1EbfHe