A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAEFSdrT6fYa
謝謝你,不過我這篇沒名字欸—583Please respect copyright.PENANAZavXmAwNEb
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAtCrH7wt5tc
你指標題?583Please respect copyright.PENANASbhs0nEaiG
但有時訂標題也很困難~583Please respect copyright.PENANApVAqfbY5hM
就像你這一段對話(給我看的故事)到底想向讀者表達什麼,很難用十個字以來形容得完。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAZiQFjKXqh6
嗯對啊,583Please respect copyright.PENANA7em8TdxY0x
所以才困擾嘛。
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAj75vU2FUO9
那是因為,你寫的時候沒有先定主旨,583Please respect copyright.PENANA2jHbLlBNan
所以沒有中心思想在。583Please respect copyright.PENANANpArhXCSwk
我猜的對嗎?
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANATykuwr0ONm
嗯,我所有寫出來的都是臨時起意的。583Please respect copyright.PENANAto029E7P9B
所以...有時候看以前的文,都還會想著:這真是我寫過的嗎?583Please respect copyright.PENANAaxc9ToQKmN
對了,我所有的文都無題。
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAqIFfXOosIS
看來你真的很喜歡想這些小故事!583Please respect copyright.PENANACoKqmb2YvE
如果是長篇故事,很難沒有主題和中心思想。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAXWfQ6aNz7K
那是因為我很沒耐心,只能寫短的啊!
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANArvFWC8voIS
哈哈~真的嗎~XDD583Please respect copyright.PENANA9DZmffNEfd
我認為呢~ 只是因為這個故事你沒有材料寫不下去。583Please respect copyright.PENANAmfnQtiaTCl
所以下一次你會想到其他人發生其他的故事,583Please respect copyright.PENANAmiMi5ZF0dI
而不是一直把這個故事接下去,寫成長篇。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAFB7aPGoyxH
當然是真的啊~所以我之前的小說寫到後面全都是我朋友寫的。583Please respect copyright.PENANAovB6TM71UR
說來有點不負責任,但我就是沒辦法好好寫完,因為往往都是在我還沒寫完一篇,另一篇的靈感就來了。583Please respect copyright.PENANAC5DhmPPC9n
我才剛打完你就講了我要說的😂😂 狂
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAVJUWevWFw0
我指的「材料」,其實就是你「靈感」的原料。583Please respect copyright.PENANAE0EOPGGK2C
沒有「靈感」,是因為你「材料」用完了。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAsXUKYDvlNO
那材料沒了怎麼補充啊?
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAX3VFh7QMph
我先教你如何準備材料,好嗎?
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAASk21mcV8F
好啊。
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAuAugI2qVsx
如果寫作課給你一個題目:「強者和弱者」,三百字。583Please respect copyright.PENANAKTyQiogPF0
你會想到寫什麼故事?我們看看裡面有什麼材料在。583Please respect copyright.PENANA8JQVwARunp
大致形容一下你想到的畫面就好。583Please respect copyright.PENANAv58YwzwJ4t
這個大致形容就是你的中心思想了。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANA9LxM1G4ObE
好的,583Please respect copyright.PENANAXHfa7bmIGs
強者和弱者=弱肉強食的世界、583Please respect copyright.PENANAlqBfISaHIf
有關言情的武俠小說吧。
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAPfngfyRou4
『弱肉強食』是第一類材料,583Please respect copyright.PENANAFNKI3Z8NcJ
『武俠』和『言情』第二類材料。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAxjAS7l0lvM
弱肉強食怎麼會是材料啊?
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAtX4VlabVPt
讓我配上一些東西說明吧。583Please respect copyright.PENANAAUEIeECvkB
『英雄』『總裁』『乞丐』『軍人』是第三類材料583Please respect copyright.PENANAUb5JQW2y07
有了這些材料,可以組織出故事靈感。583Please respect copyright.PENANA0FyNe8Qpp8
比如:583Please respect copyright.PENANAtzaCCwMPGu
『乞丐』是強者,而『總裁』是弱者。583Please respect copyright.PENANAtHRA1U7T2O
兩者之間發生了一個『弱肉被強食』的故事。而這是一個『言情』做主題。583Please respect copyright.PENANAn9SUtQghww
總裁被乞丐吃了(攻受意味
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAPhvkq7eXB8
還是不懂欸
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAcyh1wd5syN
嗯...我好像舉錯例了
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANARKdxGeEd4n
你的思維和他人不同啊…
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAOP0zqb9SdD
『弱肉強食』描述兩個事物的互相關係583Please respect copyright.PENANA7WK2FEORHg
一個強,一個弱,對吧?
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAUxe0IeWv27
嗯,對啊
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAwQCrDtY5Ta
有了這個定義之後,憑空創作出來的人物就有『身份和關聯』,583Please respect copyright.PENANAV1GPg8WrrV
他們在故事裡,一個強,一個弱,強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANARrrJ5p0k6Y
強的一方是在欺壓弱的一方的話,那弱的一方是在反抗的一方嗎?
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANALGlxGVxzTC
這個要再看其他材料能給你什麼想像了:583Please respect copyright.PENANASWzYxuG0Zg
『老虎』和『兔子』做材料的話,弱者看起來不可能反抗。583Please respect copyright.PENANALbfPmbv3co
但如果在放『讓弱者打敗強者』的劇本裡,就會變出弱者反抗強者的情節來。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANANoqLq3V3fN
哦~
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAXln8QUPQv5
然後我就從沒靈感,變成可能想像和寫出:583Please respect copyright.PENANAnXLgh57tk3
『一隻兔子用陷阱打敗了老虎』(配上智謀)583Please respect copyright.PENANAov7ckpWjlb
『一百隻兔子聯合打敗了老虎』(配上團結)583Please respect copyright.PENANADdLwWkBPAZ
的故事
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANA7kd2HXRRa6
好的、583Please respect copyright.PENANAsqDv7kMHUi
可是這故事好誇張啊,一百隻欸!
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAcweMy3YZuW
哈哈~誇張是能讓你記得的套路XD
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANA6kNsCMKNKF
現在,我們回來看看你原來的故事有什麼材料?又少了什麼材料? 好嗎?
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAjciZ3q9R5H
我的故事有少什麼嗎?
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANA0tfOxvkMwl
不知道~ 但你有興趣聽聽我的分析嗎?
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAEIeZcKW2Sz
好,只要是能讓我變好的我都聽!
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAymc9qSKr3p
你想不下去,是因為這個故事只有幾個材料:583Please respect copyright.PENANAUwNBlWgSMw
1.『爭執』583Please respect copyright.PENANApsSO1kUSA5
2.『有錢人/富貴的人』583Please respect copyright.PENANA1I7uaiEBse
3.『分手的情人(主角)』583Please respect copyright.PENANA9cgz5toAAJ
4.『狠心的姐姐(主角)』583Please respect copyright.PENANA7x2mHo00AG
5.『不孝女(主角)』
其中3-5都是文章中的"我"她與各人的關係
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAY0zRX25ZIU
嗯,對,可是這又說明了什麼嗎?
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAhBOeSXNi8m
當主角"我"的『爭執』一完了,整個故事也就沒有其他料能用,所以發展不下去了。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANA2YIUgfBNqc
那如果加入復仇呢583Please respect copyright.PENANAEfm48pTR9p
搶她大姐的未婚夫583Please respect copyright.PENANAuMiJClrtZE
怎麼樣?
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAURFTKQGTCa
沒錯~要寫下去就要更多的材料。那下一章《復仇》就是你想要的標題了583Please respect copyright.PENANARJZpGYo5HK
這一章叫《爭執》、下一章叫《復仇》……583Please respect copyright.PENANAPKGhCXD8jv
故事主軸可能就是『夏家因怨』。
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAdbgmlQkORg
好的,了解啦
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANAqWPksovG5B
嗯...那男主要誰?
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANA8gH57X4XEX
不一定要有吧~?583Please respect copyright.PENANAdC0ix1Qao6
兩個女主角又如何?
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANApzVjVzMPo0
可是我只寫過言情小說啊…
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANA7RS8Vg3MaB
比如583Please respect copyright.PENANATQzvcYW337
1."我(筑楓)"對夏家『復仇』583Please respect copyright.PENANASRGZRpiSVn
2.雨星又對"我"『復仇』
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAL0VfHcVRsV
呵呵~沒關係~材料齊集靈感到了,你就知道該怎樣寫了!583Please respect copyright.PENANAzLNVyICohM
(要創作男主角,也是一樣用『材料』。)XD583Please respect copyright.PENANAZscrF568wL
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAA9GiXjXZjj
只要你學懂解析自己文章裡有什麼材料,要從無沒靈感變有靈感會容易得多。 583Please respect copyright.PENANAtkSDpL5dG2
A君:583Please respect copyright.PENANA2RIEgHYR4R
你好厲害啊!583Please respect copyright.PENANA4E8IzXuAtg
(重新把故事編排)583Please respect copyright.PENANAvj9kdKXyc8
龍晨P:583Please respect copyright.PENANAw5U9ls4lQZ
你真的做很好了~剩下的請再找其他人幫你啦~583Please respect copyright.PENANApZnKYXCL1Y