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習慣
ENTRY #5
Author: 夢若雲
Published:
Aug 29, 2017
習慣
Published:
Aug 29, 2017
ENTRY #5
結語
Author: 夢若雲
Published:
Aug 29, 2017
1 Min Read
239 Words
No Plagiarism!U2CNyKTESpoo8WdipUDPposted on PＥNAＮＡ

謝謝參與的朋友！當初就怕沒人來寫，所以自己也來參加。（當然不打算把自己排名啦XD）

我是以「自己認為最接近題目主旨」來做排名，其次才是劇情，最後才是其他細節。

總之，我做了個短評：

兀心－《壞習慣》，雖然故事最短，卻是我覺得最符合題目主旨的，其中「好習慣也是習慣，壞習慣也是習慣」很寫實，很貼近生活。最後提到的「社會化的習慣」是指準時上課嗎？ww

樂語－《喜歡》，劇情我很喜歡，最後面讓我替那女孩感到難過，「習慣喜歡你」這句改成「習慣被你喜歡」會不會比較好？我覺得意境也會不太一樣。

緹琳－《習慣了…對不起》，故事很甜，讓我不得不戴起墨鏡XD，其次就是排版問題，看得有點花@@

最後恭喜前三名！

13.58.219.150

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