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重光雜記
ISSUE #49
Author: 森重光
重光雜記
Author: 森重光
ISSUE #49
加法與減法
No Plagiarism!7NChHxN4anBYePNknzK9posted on PＥNAＮＡ

在寫作這條路上打滾一定時日後，漸漸有一些早期沒有的感悟。

其中一種想法，大概就是標題所講的加法與減法。

剛開始寫作，總絞盡腦汁把所有能想到的通通塞進去，讓文章乍看之下更豐富，可能是為了發表時字數更多看起來更有成就感，也可能是其他種種原因。用各種形容詞、心理描寫去放慢故事節奏，讓字數滿出來。

近幾年的我，覺得比起加法，難的其實是減法。去刪減字數，用更少的字表達相同甚至更好的情感。

用更少的字數，卻能帶出更飽滿的文字重量與厚度，這反而是最難的。

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Last updated: May 1, 2024
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