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書評活動！僅限冷門題材
ENTRY #16
Author: Tolerh
Published:
Jul 27, 2026
書評活動！僅限冷門題材
Published:
Jul 27, 2026
ENTRY #16
【書評】《Ave Maira：家的黑暗》
Author: Tolerh
Published:
Jul 27, 2026
1 Min Read
161 Words
No Plagiarism!glvF4RDLnWm33FuNxJPBposted on PＥNAＮＡ

該作背景設定非常美式，輕百合向的主角群日常互動搭起來也是不錯的選擇。

美式場景的描寫可以再更好，敘述部分的文句似乎不太順暢，我想並不是翻譯或是廣東話造成的語言隔閡問題。16Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy5Qr4qXXJO

我可以透過該作感受到美國的貧窮市井，甚至有種8、90年代的感覺，可能是我過度解讀了嗎？但那種憂鬱唯美的氛圍隱藏在字裡行間，如果它們能被更好的表達出來，我想會讓作品更上一層樓。

感謝參與！

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