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幫大家評文！
ENTRY #34
Author: Vincent
Published:
Jul 27, 2026
幫大家評文！
Published:
Jul 27, 2026
ENTRY #34
【評價】籠中的金絲雀
Author: Vincent
Published:
Jul 27, 2026
1 Min Read
74 Words
No Plagiarism!luPz41rtpnFZDAJ7sBKwposted on PＥNAＮＡ 10Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1vHiC4K2RV

嘗試新的手法，父慈子孝的故事。

這個是初稿，希望評一下，找一下方向。

整個故事是不同角色的讀白

https://www.penana.com/story/219708/%E5%A4%96%E5%82%B3-%E7%B1%A0%E4%B8%AD%E7%9A%84%E9%87%91%E7%B5%B2%E9%9B%80-%E8%A9%A6%E6%92%AD10Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuR9S2xcndw

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