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ENTRY #3
Author: Lethe
Published:
Jun 28, 2026
互評留言活動
Published:
Jun 28, 2026
ENTRY #3
來交流互評~~~
Author: Lethe
Published:
Jun 28, 2026
1 Min Read
243 Words
No Plagiarism!CkajC4TE86VUCu9D6G3uposted on PＥNAＮＡ

想要大大看的作品大大已經在看了

不過還是留個連結，看看有沒有機會吸引到其他人

概念：世界

由一群擁有名為「概念」的特殊能力者——概念者，利用他們擁有的概念與人類之敵，同樣擁有概念的擬似生命體：概念惡魔，戰鬥的故事。

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《寂時都》的觀後感：我覺得作者大大對回憶篇的應用很熟練，透過回憶篇讓角色變得更加立體。

同時過去的日常對應現在殘酷地現實，那個反差感實在是讓人欲罷不能www

然後教會跟時協與主角直接錯綜複雜的關係以及時不時釋出的新伏筆都讓人更有繼續讀下去的動力。

對我來說這種時獸與時狩者的題材十分新穎，我想等第二章出來後我還是會繼續追下去的！！

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