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書僮評書
ENTRY #8
Author: 枯骨薔薇
Published:
May 30, 2026
書僮評書
Published:
May 30, 2026
ENTRY #8
《執念經紀》
Author: 枯骨薔薇
Published:
May 30, 2026
1 Min Read
211 Words
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【作品名稱】

《執念經紀》

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【作品連結】

 https://www.penana.com/story/211327/執念經紀

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【我想說的話】

這是一本暗黑哥德風的都市傳說群像悲劇，故事圍繞舊城區的收帳人「經紀」展開。他替刺青師薇拉收走每一份不願消失的執念，卻在清算的過程中，逐漸發現自己也成了帳簿上最後一筆壞帳。

我在創作中著重鋪墊了舊城區的壓抑氛圍、角色間隱藏的張力，以及「執念與遺忘」的主題。希望能得到你對角色塑造、氛圍營造和世界觀鋪墊方面的反饋，特別是經紀這個角色的行為邏輯和弧光是否足夠說服力。

感謝舒桐大大你開這個創挑，也很期待你的看法！

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