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書僮評書
ENTRY #16
Author: Lethe
Published:
May 31, 2026
書僮評書
Published:
May 31, 2026
ENTRY #16
《概念：世界》
Author: Lethe
Published:
May 31, 2026
1 Min Read
122 Words
No Plagiarism!q333F6cHgb88DE7hjyB3posted on PＥNAＮＡ

155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHfgIPqsa4c

1. 作品名稱：概念：世界

2. 作品連結：概念：世界

3. 想說的話：如果可以的話希望不要評的太嚴厲，本人有些玻璃哈哈

目前被提過的缺點是資訊量有點太大，不確定在進行分章處理之後有沒有好轉一些，如果沒有我會再修的

不知道大大有沒有機會收到那麼後面，若是有幸能被收到就事先感謝大大了

155Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwG9czrJWtC

216.73.217.114

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