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第一屆 【大Y不專業書評】
ENTRY #7
Author: 原子能
Published:
May 16, 2026
第一屆 【大Y不專業書評】
Published:
May 16, 2026
ENTRY #7
《寰宇碰撞論》
Author: 原子能
Published:
May 16, 2026
1 Min Read
137 Words
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標題：《寰宇碰撞論》

連結：https://www.penana.com/story/191116

評文方式：不限制，請Y大放開了講，隨意切換模式也可，若不喜隨意，還請Y大選擇(模式 A，不留情面)

創作者的話：這是本人的第一部小說，文筆拙劣，更說不上商業規劃，隨著後續的學習，目前正在規劃對拙作重新優化，若能得到Y大的建議勢必有所幫助。

備註：雖說有修仙與科幻標籤，但建構的並不成熟。

143Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDFw6eTqSj2

216.73.216.45

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