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第一屆 【大Y不專業書評】
ENTRY #24
Author: 雲天
Published:
Jun 8, 2026
第一屆 【大Y不專業書評】
Published:
Jun 8, 2026
ENTRY #24
長篇小說《原罪》
Author: 雲天
Published:
Jun 8, 2026
1 Min Read
203 Words
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標題：原罪

評文方式：不留情面

創作者的話：這部作品的構思已經從數年前開始，由那時期開始受一些著名輕小說影響以致大量系統流/升級流的著作面世，反而缺少了一些以硬核、鬥智鬥腦的冒險故事。

然後我就在育兒的空閒時間開始適時寫下忽發奇想的故事內容，幾年間偶爾出現不同背景的劇情發展，於是想到以硬核大宇宙的方式一步步融入各種故事，故此現在開始正式寫成各種冒險故事分享出去，滿足個人的分享慾。

備註：七月中旬才完結第一卷，所以沒有特別需求，小弟的劣作拜託了...

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