寫於2005041472Please respect copyright.PENANApbFHQwHetU
路過學校,心血來潮地探看
新生訓練時的老樹,手與手指皆斷72Please respect copyright.PENANA4sxnIOVa8x
想來不必擔心,三分球不入網而入樹了72Please respect copyright.PENANA5yqrkSvOa1
然而我們早已不在那打球
暗紅色跑道變成藍灰色72Please respect copyright.PENANAUW5lTkMqgd
比賽時,我們曾猶豫脫鞋跑快,還是穿鞋跑不受傷72Please respect copyright.PENANAorL9bF34mz
想來也無須再想
回憶歷歷72Please respect copyright.PENANAGfvsDtr1HN
人說:一日如隔三秋72Please respect copyright.PENANAwVUIMKPMHX
怎成了,三秋如昨日呢?
微調。72Please respect copyright.PENANAl8HtsF79Ya
以前有段時間很喜歡不用標點符號。72Please respect copyright.PENANA59P8aS3Qca
覺得新詩的斷句要用空格(還一定要用全形)。72Please respect copyright.PENANAvt7xnwoh1J
但實際上不懂空格的用意。
之後應該還是有這樣的詩,視情況做調整吧。72Please respect copyright.PENANA8phMN12U12
有時是刻意營造的。72Please respect copyright.PENANAw4KqmZVQW9
我滿喜歡文字獲得自由、到處亂跑,或者瀕臨破碎的氛圍。


