寫於2005041473Please respect copyright.PENANA0Dz4FRDI1O
路過學校,心血來潮地探看
新生訓練時的老樹,手與手指皆斷73Please respect copyright.PENANAEEDHrDNvrD
想來不必擔心,三分球不入網而入樹了73Please respect copyright.PENANAffEOuOh0CC
然而我們早已不在那打球
暗紅色跑道變成藍灰色73Please respect copyright.PENANAWfcAJkMgej
比賽時,我們曾猶豫脫鞋跑快,還是穿鞋跑不受傷73Please respect copyright.PENANAMpvGwPHH3M
想來也無須再想
回憶歷歷73Please respect copyright.PENANA71WVlnmaos
人說:一日如隔三秋73Please respect copyright.PENANA2L7DGioFRO
怎成了,三秋如昨日呢?
微調。73Please respect copyright.PENANAdYePrY1rvi
以前有段時間很喜歡不用標點符號。73Please respect copyright.PENANAZVs9lXbJHi
覺得新詩的斷句要用空格(還一定要用全形)。73Please respect copyright.PENANA29ouK652aj
但實際上不懂空格的用意。
之後應該還是有這樣的詩,視情況做調整吧。73Please respect copyright.PENANAnyvpawIIJ4
有時是刻意營造的。73Please respect copyright.PENANAMjtfSdsa4B
我滿喜歡文字獲得自由、到處亂跑,或者瀕臨破碎的氛圍。


