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幻空燕書評---火苗計畫
ENTRY #8
Author: 子不語
Published:
Apr 21, 2026
幻空燕書評---火苗計畫
Published:
Apr 21, 2026
ENTRY #8
《荒野的新郎》
Author: 子不語
Published:
Apr 21, 2026
1 Min Read
154 Words
No Plagiarism!DTcVvLcZoFB4gxLa8LKAposted on PＥNAＮＡ

1. 作品名稱： 《烈火之心番外——荒野的新郎》

2. 作品連結： 

https://www.penana.com/article/1950269

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3. 評論範圍：

因為是一個長篇小說中的短篇，所以第一回是從#87開始，在#96完結，總共24000字。請隨意看～

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4. 作品優點：

人物個性鮮明，奇幻世界觀設定仔細，每個人物都很有喜感。

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5. 作品缺點：

男主角個性消極，都靠女主角拉動。世界觀設定有點複雜，因為要塞在兩萬多字裡面，所以可能會覺得一直偷塞設定。

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感謝大大的書評～～！！

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