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幻空燕書評---火苗計畫
ENTRY #5
Author: 莉卡莉卡
Published:
Apr 20, 2026
幻空燕書評---火苗計畫
Published:
Apr 20, 2026
ENTRY #5
拜託了，未來的我！
Author: 莉卡莉卡
Published:
Apr 20, 2026
1 Min Read
148 Words
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作品名稱：拜託了，未來的我。

連結：https://android.penana.com/story/208068/%E6%8B%9C%E8%A8%97%E4%BA%86-

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評論範圍：1～5章

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優點：

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劇情節奏相對輕鬆，設定和大綱也較為完整。

至少本人看的時候體感還行。

（自己說自己小說的優點總有種老王賣瓜的感覺。）

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缺點：

雖然本人對劇本的大致結構都有構想，但細節方面還沒想好。很多小情節都是編寫邊想的。

以及本人悲傷的文筆和錯字率，看起來可能有些出戲。

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