檢討：
首先，他們的本質還是個人，所有兵器都一樣，只是他們不太能真正展露出情感，雖然第一章就把震撼彈給投了，但轉折說實話屬實有點生硬，這就是摸頭殺的實力吧(笑)。自認為劇情寫得很好，但其實根本拉的一坨，坑也有點太多了，世界觀後續會補上。(主要還是這是臨時起意寫得不太好)74Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiFfSmhhTir
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各章節廢案及反思
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檢討文章：有人性的「不明」兵器
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