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歡迎宣傳，故事心得交流-有讀必回✍️
ENTRY #19
Author: 剪月
Published:
May 4, 2026
歡迎宣傳，故事心得交流-有讀必回✍️
Published:
May 4, 2026
ENTRY #19
銜月照心心得
Author: 剪月
Published:
May 4, 2026
1 Min Read
360 Words
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感謝作者舉辦這個挑戰！目前看了前五章，以下是我作為一個單純讀者的讀後感～

文筆流暢，開頭很有趣，也馬上呈現出主角的鮮明個性，內心的吐槽和他的舉止形成了大反差也增加很多笑點。

尤其我特別喜歡主角的抱怨和厭世（？）

我比較少在其他修仙作品中看到主角出現這樣的念頭，所以看到時有種頓悟的感覺：對耶，長壽的修仙者不只要日復一日鑽研功法，還有應付同輩之間可能出現的惡性競爭，應該會很累吧？

不過第四章的打鬥段落有點雜亂，也許是作者想刻意營造出這樣的氛圍？因為當下的主角精神狀態似乎挺不妙的，這樣的敘事方式確實增加了帶入感。但可能是我的慧根不足，所以我看的時候也跟著頭昏腦脹了 XDD

前面這幾章也埋了很多伏筆，讓我很好奇主角如此與眾不同的原因是什麼。不知道之後會不會出現愛情線呢？期待後續！

以下是我想要交流的作品，再麻煩了(›´ω`‹ )

｜書名｜反派月老升職指南

｜標籤｜奇幻、快穿、愛情、惡役女主

｜連結｜https://www.penana.com/story/162058/反派月老升職指南/

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