最近，偶爾，會對別人發在粹上的作品做些評論，有人封鎖有人覺得還行。
我本意是想，那種「每日一詩」的人，應該是想練習吧？練習應該會想進步吧？我提些意見也沒到很尖銳，怎麼就生氣了？不然你每日一詩毫無進步感，不是很糟糕嗎？
後來想想可能還是需要多鼓勵，鼓勵完再批評，就像今天口考時口委們的說法一樣，要先誇誇再「但是」。
雖然我個人比較喜歡評論者直擊我要害告訴我問題在哪。
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茶水間日記第四期
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Apr 21, 2026
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【4/21 Day 21】評
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