一邊改論文一邊思考著寫詩（不論古典ＯＲ現代）這件事，就我所知友人們有兩派，一派人寫好後不改，覺得不足就寫下一首；一派是不停回顧去修，修到當下滿意為止。
我應該偏不停修的，因為以前都會想著「這首感覺好好喔留著投稿」，然後放到要投稿前拿出來一看就會想改，尤其現代詩常常整句、整段改掉；古典詩最常改的則是律詩對句部分，絕句大抵都覺得我好強不需要改（？）頂多改一兩個字。
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茶水間日記第四期
Published:
Jun 3, 2026
ENTRY #2226
【06/03 Day64】寫詩
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