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老薑糖隨手筆記
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逛逛故事、寫寫心得,有什麼寫什麼,絕對不專業
模式一:整體性分析,會明確指出問題、改善建議及優勢評估
模式二:作者自省與反思,偏向「我怎麼會這麼想」的自言自語,評論內容不一定
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(吃不下的作品類型:過於古言、硬核歷史、基礎格式不完全等)
Total Reading Time: 35 minutes
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最後,也很高興這部作品能帶給薑糖大愉快的心情😁
最近正在練習從作品中學習,米粒的雙視角敘事讓我收穫不少,也很享受這樣一個可愛的故事~
能猜對作者意圖,對我而言也是非常開心的事情,有種答對了的成就感😆
這故事真是我的一大挑戰,當初開書時不斷在各元素中迷路,想要社會議題、人性溫暖、奇幻打鬥,又想要寫愛情,很怕讀者看了會不知道主軸在哪,最怕寫著寫著變中二(差點就要有招式的名稱了🤣)
不過確實,日常的小心動可以再多一點,似乎也是因為這樣,顯得44號喜歡巧蠻的情況比較明顯🤣🤣
我覺得很有幫助!!再次感謝妳的心得,愛妳喔❤️❤️❤️