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拳拳到肉(書評)
車理小龜
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1.這是書評，但僅限戰鬥回

2.我不專業

3.我只是想強逼自己多看看點新東西

4.上限15，視情況增加。

5.一人限一次

好的打戲應當跌宕起伏，擁有適當的轉折與翻盤，所以我會針對雙方/多方的戰術作出評價。

同時在兼顧流暢度的同時，對動作本身進行設計，給予讀者可靠的細節去說服觀眾。

也許也應該要和場景發生交互，甚至在當前場景下具有某種意境。

最後要對全書劇情產生意義而非為打而打。

大概會針對以上幾點評價。

如果是oo使用了大字火(特效描寫若干字)，之後說明敵人掉了多少hp，那我會直說不好。

格式

沒甚麼特別的。

最低要求是要有連結和看那幾回。

為甚麼要這樣要求?因為我不會通靈，我不能隔空得知你想我評價的部分。

特殊設定和前文提要。

你可以沒有，但這樣有很大機會令評價有失偏執，甚至我可能會說有機械降神的情況。




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