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善惡目
ISSUE #5
Author: 紫鳳
善惡目
Author: 紫鳳
ISSUE #5
修改
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第一章

有部分進行修改，原本玫瑰的形象還沒有完成，現在基本完成了，所以之後其他的的描寫也會進行修改但是大方向的基本不會改

修改如下

整個人被從椅子上拖下直至女子身前，女子一席白髮部分白髮被紅色絲帶綁起，一隻紅眼，另一邊則用面具擋起，雙手似在遮掩什麼戴上了黑色手套，穿著一襲紅色長裙，裙子上的口袋放著一把手槍。

修改至下

整個人被從椅子上拖下直至女子身前，女子一席白髮部分白髮被紅色絲帶綁起，一隻紅眼另一邊則用面具擋起，說是面具不如說是一朵玫瑰花，穿著紅色長裙，裙子上的口袋放著一把手槍。

（好）羅司從口袋中拿出一朵玫瑰花放在火燒不到的地方。

修改至下

（好）羅司從面具上取出玫瑰花放在火燒不到的地方，玫瑰花下是一副笑臉面具，無處不透著詭異。

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Last updated: Jun 26, 2026
Total word count: 7,638
Total reading time: 25 Minutes
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紫鳳
偵探 霸凌 怪盜 善惡 地府世界觀
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