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【一生一次】閱讀創挑0.0
ENTRY #10
Author: 璃末
Published:
Jan 9, 2026
【一生一次】閱讀創挑0.0
Published:
Jan 9, 2026
ENTRY #10
【小說家】不入流的第十小說家
Author: 璃末
Published:
Jan 9, 2026
1 Min Read
118 Words
No Plagiarism!1QKiIZPwZY3WrtVfKMP2posted on PＥNAＮＡ

　　這裡先感謝謝謝老師的邀請啦~~

　　

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　　連結：　https://www.penana.com/story/195622/%E4%B8%8D%E5%85%A5%E6%B5%81%E7%9A%84%E7%AC%AC%E5%8D%81%E5%B0%8F%E8%AA%AA%E5%AE%B6

　　

　　Q1：菜根菜根，隨你發揮!!

　　

　　Q2：必須是老師好吧(可自答我就不客氣啦~~XD

118Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFxtpYl76b3

       Q3:想要請老師幫我看看角色塑造的是否鮮明，以及對話方面是否有不合理處(第一次寫第一人稱不太熟)。

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