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As she steps into Rosebourg Institute, Elise can tell something's off– it's completely silent.

Hii, as promised, here is the full draft of my story 'Perfection'. Feedback would be greatly appreciated as I work on the second draft! Hope you enjoy it!



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Last updated: Jan 5, 2026
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